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-description: Previous owner of the "Barnesville Bottle Shop", self proclaimed "good ole boy" of the county, and local antagonist.
+description: Previous liquor store owner and proclaimed political influencer.
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 {{< persona title="Brian Alex Abernathy" thumbnail="https://res.cloudinary.com/solardump/image/upload/v1728579477/persons/pixelArt-1728579072273.webp" >}}
 
-Was the owner of the Barnesville Bottle Shop, and his father was Game Warden for the region. The first thing he did when he moved into the area was flatten this beautiful old growth forest, subdivided and developed a quarter of our road into two acre lots, and then drained all of our family's wells for his private swimming lake. Used political favors to railroad a solar power plant through approval, and highly probable to be involved in and/or the antagonist in the attempt to run our family into the ground.
+Previous liquor store owner, son of former Game Warden, and 
 
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 For someone, we barely know, it's crazy how much of a negative influence he has been on our lives. We didn't ask for any of it, and just wanted to be left alone to live our lives in the countryside. 
 
+The first thing he did when he moved into the area was flatten this beautiful old growth forest, subdivided and developed a quarter of our road into two acre lots, and then drained all of our family's wells for his private swimming lake. Used political favors to railroad a solar power plant through approval, and highly probable to be involved in and/or the antagonist of the entire affair.
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 None of this would have happened if he and his associates would have just met people on their own level, and deal with them in a square straight forward manner. None of this assuming what will or will not affect others, because the only people that know what will affect them are the ones being affected. You also can't decide what is or is not someone else's business either, last time it was checked, there is no eleventh commandment declaring what is and what is not someone else's business. People decide that thing on their own, for themselves, because they are the only ones who know what will have an impact on their lives. 
 
-As a result, going around and telling lies, sneaking behind their back, and or concealing from other people what is or is not their business, completely undermines one's own integrity. This is one sure fire way of being accused of cheating or being crooked or dishonest. Another means of earning such a reputation is by associating oneself with other individuals who possess these traits, it is true that we are often known by the company we keep.
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+As a result, going around and concealing from other people what is or is not their business, completely undermines one's own integrity. If one wanted to avoid earning such a reputation, then they should remember to avoid associating themselves with other individuals who possess these negative traits.
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